Hack Yourself Tricks: the "Reader Draft"
The first draft of your novel isn't meant to be read by a stranger. You need it to get to the next draft, of course. Gotta start somewhere. But that first time through isn't good enough to show someone. Some parts wouldn't make sense to anyone but you - they need clarification. Other parts may be unnecessarily repetitive because you were working out the plot on the page, dumping exposition for your own understanding of the plot that you'd never include in the final draft. Still other parts might just be the bare bones outline of a scene, plot points jotted down so you get the idea out of your head. "He opens the door, there's a monster, there's some kind of fight, he wins." You know what happens in the scene, but it's not ready to be read by anyone else. There are exceptions. I have this notion Stephen King types novels start to finish with no outline and no revisions and emails them directly to a printing press so it ships to bookstores the next m...